Maltloaf's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Arecibo Theme Song (Ver. 2)]

Not bad at all...

I dunno who zero'd you, but that really wasn't deserved.

I can only see two areas for improvement myself - the first is the hi notes at about 34-55 seconds - the quality of those notes doesn't quite fit the other instruments.

The other is the rythem section. It would probably sound a little more real if you added some more layers and varied the timing a bit between those layers, so that it sounds more like a natural play. At the moment the timings just sounds a little too clinical.

Then again, I'm not exactly an expert in this stuff. Probably better ways of doing that. XD

Other than those, it is a good peice. Consistent, mixed well, and something that can be built off. Thats pretty much exactly what you want in a theme.

-Malt
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BreakingFaces responds:

Thanks

[The Clouds are Gone]

Just needs practice...

There are a lot of mistakes that I can hear in the recording - it's probably a bad idea to upload your first take. :)

What you want to do is keep practicing it, and let the peice matureas you do. If you come back and record it again after a weeks practice, it'll sound a lot better. :)

Cant offer much advice on the volume tho, except maybe strapping the mic to the guitar. XD

firebanesword responds:

xD thanks for the review. Unfortunately, as the mic happens to be a jack for the guitar, I don't think I can put the mic any closer.

And I probably will rerecord this. Thanks again!